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	<title>Comments on: Growing Pains</title>
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		<title>By: Annie Wicking</title>
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		<dc:creator>Annie Wicking</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 12 Mar 2009 20:57:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>When my ms came back from a publisher, I had sent it to, they said I hadn&#039;t written enough background information on my characters. I was worried that I would give too much information in one block rather than a little at a time for the reader to build up a picture of my characters as the story unfolded.&lt;br/&gt;&lt;br/&gt;I&#039;m now write a page per character to get to know them in person before rewriting my novel. I had writing their personal details out when I had created them, but this is a page of being inside their heads.&lt;br/&gt;&lt;br/&gt;I think it&#039;s working as I have a clear picture of their way of thinking.&lt;br/&gt;&lt;br/&gt;You have a great blog here and I&#039;m so glad I found you.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>When my ms came back from a publisher, I had sent it to, they said I hadn&#8217;t written enough background information on my characters. I was worried that I would give too much information in one block rather than a little at a time for the reader to build up a picture of my characters as the story unfolded.</p>
<p>I&#8217;m now write a page per character to get to know them in person before rewriting my novel. I had writing their personal details out when I had created them, but this is a page of being inside their heads.</p>
<p>I think it&#8217;s working as I have a clear picture of their way of thinking.</p>
<p>You have a great blog here and I&#8217;m so glad I found you.</p>
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